hmm
Your grammar and spelling was atrocious, making wanting to read the dialogue the entire way through impossible. Which in turn ruined it for me.
sorry
hmm
Your grammar and spelling was atrocious, making wanting to read the dialogue the entire way through impossible. Which in turn ruined it for me.
sorry
i will fix that problem soon, thanks for your review :P
a-a-am i supposed to create flash with my penis
Age 33, Male
maker of films
a shit one
Joined on 4/11/05